Thursday 24 June 2021

swaimah Persuasive Text: Tattoo

 Introduction 

I strongly believe that children under the age 18 should not be allowed to get a tattoo. They should not be allowed to get a tattoo because they can get hurt as it could be dangerous, tattoo ink can have chemicals in it, and tattoos might stretch because our bodies are still growing. 



First paragraph 

Firstly, children between the ages of 16 and 18 should not be allowed to have tattoos, but tattoos breach the skin, which means that skin infections and other complications are possible, including Allergic reactions and what happens if the gun machine or the hammer they can get really hurt and injured. Giving blood after recently getting a tattoo can be dangerous. It requires breaking the skin barrier, tattooing carries inherent health risks. 


Second paragraph 

Secondly, Poorly planned tattoos and piercings can cause all sorts of health problems. As tattoos have become more common, scientists have begun to study their health impacts.This body art might appear cool, but it can pose risks.


Final paragraph 

Finally, Tattoos breach the skin, which means that skin infections and other complications are possible. This can occur even years after you get the tattoo.Tattoo dyes especially red, green, yellow and blue dyes can cause allergic skin reactions, such as an itchy rash at the tattoo site. 


The conclusion


The conclusion is that kids under 18 are not allowed to get tattoos, because it is dangerous and the ink has chemicals. 

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